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Lewis Grotelueschen's avatar

My long time annoyance with Democrats (even though I became one in 2016) is the continual claims about how virtuous they are and how they message around these claims of their virtue. Thus the Democratic candidate in my local congressional race brags about having a big heart. This strikes me as the wrong type of brag. Every speech by every Democratic candidate should include the fact that the last three Democratic administrations plus Biden's one year produced over 50 million new jobs. And the last three Republican administrations: one million. And superior economic growth under Democrats can similarly be dramatized. In our cynical times, asserting your own virtue gets you nowhere. Demonstrate that you care about these top line measures of economic well-being instead of trying to get credit for spending gobsmacking amount of money. Brag about the legislation you pass by showing how it serves the goals of making the economy work for all Americans, not as some proof of your virtue.

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R Mercer's avatar

I remain stumped by how bad Democrat messaging is. It is truly a mystery to me. Really.

I have a graduate degree in rhetoric. My doctoral advisor was a speechwriter for JFK. I used to teach public speaking, argumentation, reasoning and critical thinking at university. I taught HS English for around 10 years. I look at Democratic rhetoric and SMH.

They supposedly have professionals working on this. Big firms that they are likely paying lots of money to for advice and expertise. I can only figure that they have:

1) hired total idiots; or

2) Ignore everything the experts are telling them.

The Democratic inability to clearly articulate in a non-wacko fashion (and in an inspirational way) a clear set of principles that inform and guide general policy (creating a clear link between the two) TAILORED to particular audiences is absolutely baffling.

You could do this in a fashion that is infused with the correct constitutional language, that makes clear your dedication to basic American principles that inform classical liberal government.

You could speak in moral terms that have clear antecedents in western civilization and avoid a lot of the crap language that the far left uses.

Stop talking about the details of policy, nobody necessarily cares or understands.

Stop trying to do everything with one piece of legislation. Be clear and direct, be moral, be principled--and don't undercut those things with your behavior and little things written into the laws that undercut your principles or purpose.

Seize the moral high ground, given the current GoP that should be ludicrously easy.

There is plenty of data out there to inform how you shape your message and to tell you what people (at least think) they want. USE IT.

I could write better stuff than these people are currently using, which is sad.

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